Date: 17 Mar 2007 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
very nice story-especially the end!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for the feedback! MA
Date: 08 Aug 2006 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a pretty cool story for something that was short. Really funny too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. MA
Date: 07 Aug 2006 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
The man is almost totally unselfconscious. Walking around at two in the morning lookinag for cofee can bring you face to face with a stranger that tells the truth.
Author's Response: Like "Pow! Right in the kisser!" LOL...Thank you for the feedback! MA
Date: 04 Aug 2006 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
very nice, i love your work. always good for "Those" days.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it...MA
Date: 19 Jul 2006 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is great! I love this. You did a great job with dialogue. Brava!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have always felt my dialogue is a strong suit. My character and plot development are what usually need work. Thank you again! MA
Date: 19 Jul 2006 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just really enjoy your style of writting and I hope I can look forward to more. Jolethasue
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope to have more soon!
Date: 19 Jul 2006 07:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Heehee! I read this one on FFnet, and couldn't help but smile when I saw it here, too. Daniel may have gone in search of a cup of coffee, but the outspoken female scientist certainly let him have it... right between the eyes!
Author's Response: Sending you hugs and kisses, Cleo! When someone as well written as you likes it, I know I did good! Thanks!