Date: 12 Sep 2006 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
::snorts:: well that is ONE way to get together :-P tehe very well done, I greatly enjoyed the little dance that they did together hehe
Date: 26 Aug 2006 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my I have to say I just loved the ending here...perfect in more ways than one. You made it so real - the voice the words - real and believable. Not too much of gushiness or anything. Wow! just love how you write Jack/Daniel - you do know I started to read slash because of your stories, right???
Author's Response: You're kidding? ::poor child:: *grin* Awfully glad YOU write, btw! Still absolutely LOVED Devoured.
Date: 25 Aug 2006 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved your very astute Daniel, and Jack not knowing him as well as he thought he did. Daniel ordering Dinner knowing it was Jack at the door, and Jack trying to figure out how Daniel could have ordered it, was great. A lovely tag to the episode.
Author's Response: Glad it worked for you! I've wanted to do a tag for this epy forever and finally did! LOL! Thank YOU!
Date: 25 Aug 2006 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Brillant. I've always thought that Daniel (as played by M Shanks) is stronger emotionally than most stories show him. I love how he just knows Jack so well.
Author's Response: Same here and THANK YOU!
Date: 25 Aug 2006 06:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant and lovely. Regardless of what happens in the next couple of months... don't stop writing!
Author's Response: I won't - I still write my Jim and Blair and The Sentinel has been off the air for years. :)
Date: 25 Aug 2006 01:12 am Title: Chapter 1
YES! I never bought that the rest of the team believed Jack would do that. Love the dinner, too... and the prospective anniversary. :-)
Author's Response: LOL! Me either. Seemed a big plot hole. :) But it does explain how blase the gang was later. :) That and the fact that men wrote it! LOL!