Date: 06 Sep 2006 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I almost cried. I was "with" Daniel as I followed him past Sha're.
PS I won't be "following" him with Jack.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. :)
Date: 30 Aug 2006 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
For me, the writing really suited the mood of this piece. I especially like the reflection on Jack --he's lot a lot too but still able to see beyond the loss. Something he teaches Daniel.
Author's Response: Yes, I think Daniel has learned more from Jack than he realizes. Thank you for the feedback.