Reviews For Happy Valentines Day, Daniel
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Reviewer: Cynic_al Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2007 07:45 pm Title: Chapter One

"and get started with desert?," suggessted Jack...histting Daniel's protate...and feeling him withering around, Jack smiled."

Is English your first language?

These might help:

www.dictionary.com re: desert and withering

www.spellcheck.net re: sugessted, histting and protate.

For a story this short these are obvious errors that should have been caught in even a casual proofreading. Oh and a PWP warning would also have been nice too.
Keep working on it though.

Cynic_AL


Author's Response: I have changed the typos that I missed. I am willing to accept *constructive* help, but not when the remarks are laced with sarcastic remarks and mean ones. There's no call for that! Oh, by the way, English *is* my first language.

Author's Response: I wanted to say that if the reveiws were meant as honest help, and not meant the way they sounded, I am honestly sorry for being a little short and sarcastic in my replies. After thinking about it, I realized I was being a little sensitive. Thanks.

Reviewer: Cleo the Muse Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2007 04:58 pm Title: Chapter One

*points to Anonymous Reviewer* Indeed.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2007 04:31 pm Title: Chapter One

Have you ever heard of Spellcheck?

Author's Response: What you are you two talking about? Instead of being cryptic, who don't you tell me why you wonder if I've ever heard of spellcheck? I don't see anything wrong with my story, unless you've seen some typos I do not know about.

Author's Response: What you are you two talking about? Instead of being cryptic, who don't you tell me why you wonder if I've ever heard of spellcheck? I don't see anything wrong with my story, unless you've seen some typos I do not know about.

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