Date: 26 Nov 2007 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Excellent! Loved the 'Better than a venti double shot mocha latte with whipped cream?'
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it!
Date: 25 Nov 2007 03:57 am Title: Chapter 1
This is fun. I liked Jack playing his joke on Daniel, I wonder how high he could have got it before Daniel realised the desk was getting higher.
One question : Jack fiddled with his blouse? Here in the UK, a blouse is definitely a woman's shirt, usually rather feminine. I assume it's different where you come from? Or did you use it deliberately?
Author's Response: I like fics with Jack playing pranks on Daniel - thought it was about time I wrote one. :) As for the 'blouse' in common usage that does refer to a woman's shirt in the same way you're used to. However, in military parlance 'blouse' refers to the large button-up overshirt of the BDU's, often worn with the dark t-shirt underneath it.