Date: 11 Dec 2007 03:28 am Title: Part 1
Hilarious Sarah. It made me laugh which is something I have not been doing lately much. Wonderfully worked out and written and I see you are a lady of MANY talents and look forward to reading more - fantastic story for your first fanfic - congrats!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Maureen! I'm glad it made you feel better!! Sara x
Date: 08 Dec 2007 10:05 pm Title: Part 1
That was SO funny!
I am also rotflmao - Which Means - rolling on the floor laughing my.......hind end.......off! LOL
Author's Response: Oh, that's what it means!! ;-) Thank you so much! It was a joy to write, and I'm having fun writing the next installment! Thanks for the feedback, it means a lot! x
Date: 08 Dec 2007 07:43 am Title: Part 1
ROTFLMAO! One would never know this was your first foray into the world of ff. Wonderfully done, Sara! -- char
Author's Response: I don't actually know what ROTFLAMAO means :-), but thank you very much! It is indeed my first attempt, and I'm looking forward to improving my skills with the next story!! England... here they come!! x
Date: 06 Dec 2007 02:57 pm Title: Part 1
I LOVED IT! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!
Date: 05 Dec 2007 03:04 pm Title: Part 1
Excellent start, you just HAVE to write more. What happened when they got to England?
Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for the feedback! I haven't got as far as writing the next part yet, but I'll get on it!! Sara x
Date: 04 Dec 2007 11:08 pm Title: Part 1
Well, some of those don't quite work, but for the most part, very cute! I used to work for a military supply company, and I can still recall the day I sat down in a procurement office and declared, "I'm looking for III-A PASGTs, but the RBR quote is too high. ABA has MICH or ACH only. Can you check ASC? I need to complete the RFQ by COB..."
Author's Response: Thanks Cleo! Yep, see, abbreviations are everywhere!! ;-) I must admit, they all make sense to me, but maybe some of them aren't that universal across the pond. I'd be interested to know which ones you didn't think worked. Thanks for the feedback! x