Date: 30 Apr 2008 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
You are a wonderfully talented storyteller. I look forward to future tales. One small note: Does Jack really used the term "Buddy" so much? Please keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks for your lovely feedback. Not sure about the buddy bit...I've heard him say it a few times but eh, I may have overdone it a bit *s*. More to come soon I hope - C
Date: 23 Apr 2008 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful! Gorgeous! I love your writing style. I particularly liked the camels, the chocolate covered coffee beans, and Carter 'putting a splint on it'!! Ha! Well done!! x
Author's Response: I'd hate to have Sam put a splint on me for anything! Hmmm gotta love those Choc coated coffee beans though! Thanks, Sara. - C