Reviews For The Long Way Home
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Reviewer: Soul Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2008 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ditto.........more please.........!

Reviewer: TheOneRing Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2008 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice story. I really enjoyed it.

You should really consider having a beta, though. I found lots of grammatical problems and, in many cases, I had trouble following the story line because I was struggling with punctuation and spelling errors. It was quite difficult to follow because of that.

Reviewer: Nan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2008 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Why are you reading this review when you should be writing me another story to read...please...

Author's Response: LOL! Well... your wish is my command...;-)

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