Date: 02 Sep 2008 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 29 Aug 2008 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice story. I really enjoyed it.
You should really consider having a beta, though. I found lots of grammatical problems and, in many cases, I had trouble following the story line because I was struggling with punctuation and spelling errors. It was quite difficult to follow because of that.
Date: 27 Aug 2008 06:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Why are you reading this review when you should be writing me another story to read...please...
Author's Response: LOL! Well... your wish is my command...;-)