Date: 28 Jun 2009 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg. this was freaking amazing. thank you for writing it. my favorite part may have been janet's speech about what it was like in the days after the injury, or the way sha're was just like, "oh. no. he's going to live with us." they are so giving and kind and i loved this and felt sad to realize that daniel never had this life with her. i loved their banter, daniel and share, and jack in general and with daniel. great job.
Date: 04 Dec 2008 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Good look at their friendship,really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you. Jack and Daniel's friendship is always, for us, key to the whole series.
Date: 29 Nov 2008 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm still blubbering. Wonderful, engrossing writing. Thank you!
Author's Response: Sorry about the blubbering. Thank you for taking the time to read the story. We're happy you were moved by it.
Date: 29 Nov 2008 08:15 am Title: Chapter 1
A wonderful, moving journey. This is a great story of love and sacrifice and family. Thanks for this!
Author's Response: Thank you. We wanted the story to show how Jack was still a part of Daniel's life even if Daniel and Sha're were together on Abydos.
Date: 29 Nov 2008 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Girls, that was just spectacular! I loved the way you subtly progressed Jack's speech and motor abilities with the passing of time. It gave the reader hope that everything would be better for him. Having him stay on Abydos at the end with Daniel and family was a lovely touch. Thank you for writing and sharing this beautiful story. - Cheryl
Author's Response: Thank you. Darcy and I had fun working together to make this story come to life and allowing Jack time to recover was one of our main goals with this. We are glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 28 Nov 2008 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was fantastic.
So sad at the beginning but it was wonderful to see the journey Jack took to get better.
Loved Daniel and Sha're's kids, they were so cute.
Author's Response: It was interesting exploring an AU with Daniel and Sha're together and with kids no less. We had great fun giving the kids personalities.