Date: 21 Dec 2008 02:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Ditto what Mu said :) Best Jack and Daniel banter I've read in a long time. Very "in character".
Author's Response: "In character" is a lovely compliment. Thank you so much!
Date: 18 Dec 2008 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1
This was a great read. Very impressive and believable dialogue between Jack and Daniel. Truly enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing. LD
Author's Response: Thanks LD! I'm always so happy to hear the dialogue sounds believable. And the pleasure of sharing is all mine! ~Lynne
Date: 16 Dec 2008 06:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Great story. Lots of fun to read on a cold snowy day!!
Author's Response: Glad to have made a cold, snowy day better. Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed it!
Date: 15 Dec 2008 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story. I loved your Jack and Daniel interraction, not too aggressive or childlike but two grown men who know each other so well and wrangle away. In the end there are always there for each other. I wish Jack would rejoin the team *sigh*. Also the plot is intriguing - why did the Miktagon's want Jack. Hmm.
Author's Response: really enjoy the way Jack and Daniel bicker so it's fun to write. And I figure the Miktagon want Jack for the same reason we do--he's Jack! Thanks for the great feedback!