Date: 14 Jul 2009 06:55 am Title: Roller Coaster
When l started reading rollercoaster l hadn’t realised it was a 4part series. I thought l was going to be in for a typical first time story, you know the wanting and the getting and the living happily ever after. Not so as l found out! The way you described the wanting and the getting was wonderful. The best first time l have read,[even without the kissing!!] I felt so happy for Daniel and then things turned so nasty between them. That blew me away, l definitely wasn’t expecting that, and l felt so angry towards Jack. I suppose l was angry at you too for so deftly making me believe that Jack could be such an uncaring bastard! I don’t know if you are male or female but by the end of this story l did start calling you that bitch [sorry] The characters and the story line were so well written, so believable .You have a gift!!!!! I was compelled to read In The Rough. I was sure you would redeem Jack in my eyes. How wrong was I!!!!!!!
I have reviewed all 4 stories
Date: 27 Mar 2007 03:35 am Title: Roller Coaster
I loved chapter 3. It just happens to be the problems that i have been experiencing in my own lovelife. I can really relate to Daniel. Everything he thought - well i have thought that too. Really emotional and spot-on. Its given me a lot to think about... thank you.
Date: 10 Jul 2006 10:53 am Title: Roller Coaster
This story is heartbreaking, in that Daniel wants emotional intimacy and Jack is protecting himself by keeping Daniel at arm's length, which hurts Daniel even more. The emotional anguish of someone who loves unloved, we hope, is resolved in a happy ending eventually.