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Summary: Jack is shocked to learn that Daniel understands exactly what he had to do in Lockdown
Rated: Mature Word count: 3580
Categories: Jack/Daniel Warnings: None
Genres: First Time, Missing Scene/Episode-Related Series: None
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill Completed: Yes
Chapters: 1 Hits: 4562
Published: 31 Mar 2006 Updated: 31 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Ayankha Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"Daniel Jackson, unexplainable." it should be inexplicable..... grammar, sorta a pet peeve.... other than that, great story

Author's Response: I wonder how both my betas and I missed that? Not a grammatical error per se, as one of those senior typing moments! LOL! I just can\'t believe it was missed! Thanks for pointing it out, I\'ll change it here. You\'re a doll! :)

Author's Response: actually, I changed my mind on this one! LOL! Unexplainable, which technically incorrect, can be used in context and kind of goes with Daniel's whacky thinking! There, that sounds like a good excuse, doesn't it? ::snicker::