Penname: Melwyn [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: 09 Sep 2008
Membership status: Member
Bio: Long time fan of SG1, slash fan, looking forward to the upcoming Stargate Worlds MMO. My favorite pairing is Jack/Daniel and I like everyone on the original SG1 team even Sam. I don't like Jack/Sam pairing, even though the show throws it at us blatantly at times, watching it however I feel that there is MUCH more to support Jack/Daniel.

I'm 26 years old, East Coast US, an avid role-player and hopefully I'll have some fics up on this site soon as the inspiration strikes me.
Yahoo IM: Tardis_10
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Reviews by Melwyn
Summary: The turn of the century in Central America, and four people are facing meaning of life questions. CHALLENGE: Something Completely Different: The same characters in a totally non-Stargate setting.
Rated: Adult Word count: 8274
Categories: Jack/Daniel Warnings: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Challenge, Drama Series: None
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill Completed: Yes
Chapters: 1 Hits: 1747
Published: 11 Mar 2006 Updated: 11 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Melwyn Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Costa Brava

This is a very good story. I do hope to see a continuation. Added to favorites.

Summary: Sometimes it takes time to see what's right in front of you.
Rated: Mature Word count: 8068
Categories: Jack/Daniel Warnings: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Friendship Series: None
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill Completed: Yes
Chapters: 1 Hits: 1687
Published: 11 Mar 2006 Updated: 11 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Melwyn Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Solitudes Touching

I love this fic, it has a pureness to it that's refreshing, and the relationship is very real. A slow fall into the known.

Author's Response: I\'m so glad that\'s what you got from the story, it\'s what was intended. Thank you for leaving feedback!

Summary: Relationships change.
Rated: Adult Word count: 54425
Categories: Jack/Daniel, Daniel/Paul Warnings: None
Genres: Angst, Drama Series: None
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill, Paul Davis Completed: Yes
Chapters: 1 Hits: 3557
Published: 13 Mar 2006 Updated: 13 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Melwyn Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic! Wonderful use of the language and I love the development of relationships. This story was bittersweet and touching, the ending was wonderful in that it wasn't an ending at all - it really feels like there's so much more left to come but I don't feel like it cut off. Definitely will recommend this fic to others.

Summary: An AU where Daniel's a professor, Jack's a retired hockey player, and the Goa'uld are the Goa'uld. And also a meta-challenge fic incorporating some of the challenges I found on the website.
Rated: Mature Word count: 20977
Categories: Jack/Daniel, Daniel/Paul Warnings: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Challenge Series: None
Characters: None Completed: Yes
Chapters: 1 Hits: 2309
Published: 20 Mar 2006 Updated: 20 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Melwyn Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great fic, love the AU ones. Paul was great in it.

Summary: Some things are just meant to be, no matter where or in what time people are.
Rated: Mature Word count: 44300
Categories: Jack/Daniel, Daniel/Other Male Warnings: Non-Consensual Sex Acts
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, First Time, Hurt/Comfort Series: None
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill, Other, Samantha Carter, Teal'c Completed: Yes
Chapters: 1 Hits: 5080
Published: 24 Mar 2006 Updated: 24 Mar 2006
Reviewer: Melwyn Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Fated to Be

I love this story, absolutely wonderful, charming and surprising. Loved it all the way through - beginning, middle and ending.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the compliments :) This is one of my favourites so I\'m always pleased when people tell me they love it.

Summary: There's no real way to summarize this other than to say it's a Stargate novel about Daniel and his separation from SG-1 that began in season 4. There's also the need to defeat Anubis, and of course, Jack and Daniel. No episodes have been recreated in this fiction, just briefly referred to.


Rated: Mature Word count: 93079
Categories: Jack/Daniel Warnings: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Character Study, Drama, First Time Series: None
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill Completed: Yes
Chapters: 4 Hits: 25380
Published: 30 Mar 2006 Updated: 28 Apr 2006
Reviewer: Melwyn Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this story, and as much as there is to love I think my favorite part was the relationship between Daniel and Paul. It was touching, well done and didn't 'butt in' on the Jack/Daniel... it just made me want to get to know Paul better.

Author's Response: Thank you, Melwyn! That was exactly what I was aiming for - and sorry about the VERY LATE response, but normally these show up in my email - but something went wrong and I haven't recvd anything. I happened to be over here getting ready to correct something and found some "new" ::snort:: reviews! Again, thank YOU!

Summary: Bank robber Jack O'Neill has spent a hard life on the run but mild mannered academic, Daniel Jackson, reckons he can teach him a thing or two about how the West was won.
Rated: Adult Word count: 13048
Categories: Jack/Daniel Warnings: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, First Time Series: Danny Get Your Gun
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill Completed: Yes
Chapters: 1 Hits: 2152
Published: 01 Apr 2006 Updated: 01 Apr 2006
Reviewer: Melwyn Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Danny Get Your Gun

I do hope you're planning on writing more of this. It's fantastic!

Summary: What happens when a famous hockey star meets a clueless but gorgeous "kinda teacher"?
Rated: Teen Word count: 12398
Categories: Jack/Daniel Warnings: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, First Time, Holiday, Vignette Series: None
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill Completed: Yes
Chapters: 1 Hits: 3064
Published: 03 Apr 2006 Updated: 03 Apr 2006
Reviewer: Melwyn Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really sweet. If you want WAFF read this.

Summary: Jack's betrayal of the SGC leads to terrible consequences for Daniel
Rated: Adult Word count: 37190
Categories: Jack/Daniel Warnings: Adult Themes, Non-Consensual Sex Acts
Genres: First Time, Hurt/Comfort Series: None
Characters: None Completed: Yes
Chapters: 1 Hits: 9110
Published: 01 Sep 2008 Updated: 01 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Melwyn Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic story. I absolutely love everything they go through, and how Daniel ends up feeling about things at the end. It couldn't have ended better and I love that this wasn't a 'quick fix slap a bandaid on it - mental anguish gone' fic.

Author's Response: Thanks, Melwyn. So glad you liked it. I enjoyed (if that\'s the right word) putting poor Daniel through the wringer on this one - well, both of them, actually! Toad x